Forever grieving the loss of fallen days
When the sun touched the tops of my bare feet
Leaving it's mark
(As if I were important)
I find my eyes closed and my mind stagnant
When the coffee is perking and the paper boy is making his rounds
I sleep the day away
And I'm breathing my life in the shadows...
















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When the sun touched the tops of my bare feet
Leaving it's mark
(As if I were important)
This is beautiful, beautiful...
it brings me back to younger days that i miss
thanks for writing it!
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"My eyes to you are no longer windows for the viewing"
Best part of the poem, right there. I love the imagery you used.
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"The question is: wouldn't mama be proud?
There's a silver lining in the corporate cloud
And the pretty post that you're taking as an NCO
Of the Great Pretender
I should sure think so
Wouldn't mama be proud?"
-Elliott Smith
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You got your toecaps reinforced with steel
Hard-wearing sole and heel
Make those tired feet feel like new
Take your pick, black or brown
Great for the country or the man in town
You're gonna need a quality shoe
"Quality Shoe" - Mark Knopfler
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